F2F Class Notes (Celeste) [W]***

Write a review about the Wanderland art expo. Try to use “where”. So, what did you see and what did you think?

Vocabulary

My mother is not good at cooking. / My mother is not a good cook. 

I studied display design in college, there were 29 students in our class, I studied and lived toghter with my classmate for 4 years. After we left college ,I worked in a Wuhan’s company for one year, and then I came to Shanghai to work. I have 8 years of experience in art and display design.During this years, I changed 3-4 companys for my job, and I had 3-4 debit cards which were different company’s salary card,I dont cancel them, but I just have one credit card which is Shanghai Pudong Development Bank.

There are also some of my college classmate in Shanghai. Three of them are designers, they design for different companys and brands.One of them who is a woman she doesn’t have a job present now, she got married and had two kids, she takes care of her kids and family at home, she wants to work after her kids to go to school 2 years later. The other one got married either, and she get to Australia and living there with her husband last year, they bought a large and beautiful house with a garden in Australia. They came back to China last weekend for a month’s holiday. So we reserved a restaurant , and all of our Shanghai’s classmate had a dinner together, we talked about our lifes and works each other and had a great happy night.

Edited

I studied display design in college where there were 29 students in our class. I lived together with 4 classmates for 4 years. After we left college, I worked in a company in Wuhan for one year, and then I came to Shanghai to work. I have 8 years of experience in art and display design. During these years, / During this time, I changed jobs 3-4 times and each time I got a new debit card. 

Or:

During this time, I changed jobs 3-4 times and I received a new company debit card.

During this time, I changed jobs 3-4 times and each company gave me a new debit card. 

I still have them I didn’t cancel them, but I just use one credit card which is from Shanghai Pudong Development Bank.

Also, some of my college classmates moved to Shanghai. Three of them are designers, they design for different companies and brands. One of them doesn’t have a job presently/now, she got married and has two kids, she takes care of her family at home, but/and she wants to work after her kids go to school in 2 years. The other one got married too, and she moved to Australia with her husband last year where they bought a large, beautiful house with a garden. They came back to China last weekend for a month long holiday. So we reserved a table at a restaurant, and all of our classmates in Shanghai had dinner together, we talked about our lives, work, each other and had a great happy night.

Grammar

where = (and) at that place
eg.I studied display design in college where there were 29 students in our class. =I studied display design in college. At that place there were 29 students in our class,

Pronunciation

hometown ( home – tao n )