F2F Class Notes (Celeste) [W]***

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Please help me to translate my email.
In this morning ，my boss contacted with teacher Zhu, We conformed the buying form that planed a spot plan and signed it by month. At the same time, We double checked with the client, If they want to cancel our campaign, our cooperation value needs re – evaluate.
The Aug. campaign is attached , Please review them and confirm if there are no problems.

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This morning, my boss contacted Teacher Zhu. We confirmed the buying form for a spot plan and will sign it each/per month. At the same time, we double checked with the client if they want to cancel our campaign. Then our cooperation value needs re-evaluating (verb) /re-evaluation (noun).
The Aug. campaign is attached. Please review it and confirm that there are no problems.
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The August campaigns are attached. Please review them and confirm that there are no problems.

When I was a little girl almost the same age with my son, I lived in the dormitory of my father’s factory.
There was a public road in the front of the dormitory’s door. One day, They must be closed the door due to they would build a tunnel. And then builders built a high wall to stop us to contact with outside. But the wall couldn’t stop me to play outside. So I climbed the stairs over the wall.

There was a sunshine day, I climbed the stairs as usual. Suddenly, One of the feet was empty, I feel down to the ground. I lost the consciousness. When I waked up , I lay down in the bad and my friend Wenwen called my name constantly. I can’t remember what happened. I didn’t felt hurt. So this thing couldn’t stop me to climb that stairs.

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When I was a little girl almost the same age as my son, I lived in the dormitory of my father’s factory.
There was a public road in front of the dormitory’s door. One day, they closed the door because they would build a tunnel under the road in front of it. And then builders built a high wall with stairs to stop us from exiting/going out the front door.  But the wall couldn’t stop me from playing outside. So I climbed the stairs over the wall.

TBC

There was a sunshine day, I climbed the stairs as usual. Suddenly, One of the feet was empty, I feel down to the ground. I lost the consciousness. When I woke up , I lay down in the bad and my friend Wenwen called my name constantly. I can’t remember what happened. I didn’t felt hurt. So this thing couldn’t stop me to climb that stairs.

We had executed four campaigns successful , Includes 3 wave TV campaigns and 1 wave OTV campaign.
The key market Shanghai was completed the reach goal cause by the highly over delivery in every campaign .

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We had executed four campaigns successfully, including 3 wave TV campaigns and 1 wave OTV campaign.
The Shanghai key market exceeded the reach goal because of over delivery in every campaign.

Grammar

we want he can do many things – we want him to be able to do many things

Vocabulary

able = can do

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exceed / exceeding / exceeded (-did) – to be greater than a number or amount, or to go past an allowed limit

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successfully – adv
eg. We successfully finished the presentation on time.

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wake / waking / woke / have or had woken up
eg. I woke up at 8:30 this morning.
eg. Last week I had woken up early everyday.