F2F Class Notes (Celeste) [W]***

Homework

Continue writing the story below. Write about your daily activities starting from the morning to the evening. What would you tell other people about Fine Yoga to persuade them to go there? (Focus on your grammar, be careful not to write too long of sentences.)

Writing exercise

Last week we cancelled dinner date because my friend Cora ‘s flight was delayed. So this homework let me talk about my Hubei trip instead of that.
Last Friday we visited the Fine Yoga who is the biggest yoga college in China. It is not only a professional yoga teacher training center, but also it is a great yoga retreat.
Many people study at Fine Yoga where they have good teachers. A lot of famous yoga masters have workshops over there. When I was practicing on the rooftop early in the morning that the fresh air surrounded me. I looked around, the clouds wreathed in the mountains. and the birds were singing. There are surprises everywhere in Fine Yoga which is Yogi ‘s paradise.

Last week my friends and I cancelled our dinner date because my friend Cora ‘s flight was delayed. So for this homework I want to write about my Hubei trip instead of that.
Last Friday we visited the Fine Yoga which is the biggest yoga college in China. It is not only a professional yoga teacher training center, but also it is a great yoga retreat.
Many people study at Fine Yoga where they have good teachers. A lot of famous yoga masters have workshops there. When I was practicing on the rooftop early on Sunday morning, the fresh air surrounded me. I looked around at the clouds wreathed in the mountains and the birds were singing. There are surprises everywhere in Fine Yoga which is a Yogi ‘s paradise.

Upgraded Version

Last week my friends and I cancelled our dinner date because my friend Cora ‘s flight from Hong Kong was delayed. So for this homework I want to write about my 3 day Hubei trip instead of that.
Last Friday after my Mysore morning practice, my teacher, Hans, his assistants Leo, Tina, and Shirley, and my husband and I flew for 2 hours from Hongqiao Airport to Wuhan. When we arrived, a car picked us up and we drove for 3 hours to a small village called Chibi to Fine Yoga which is the biggest yoga college in China. It is not only a professional yoga teacher training center, but also it is a great location/place for yoga retreats.

TBC

Many people study at Fine Yoga where they have good international teachers. Every week, a lot of famous yoga masters have workshops there. When I was practicing on the rooftop early on Sunday morning, the fresh air surrounded me. I looked around at the clouds wreathed in the mountains and the birds were singing. There are surprises everywhere in Fine Yoga which is a Yogi ‘s paradise.