F2F Class Notes (Celeste) [W]***

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Grammar

Sometimes when i running i lose my rhythm of breath.
Sometimes I lose the rhythm of my breath when I run.
Sometimes when I am running I lose my breathing rhythm.
Sometimes when I run I lose my breathing rhythm.
Sometimes when I ran I lost my breathing rhythm

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We don’t use during when we refer to numbers and lengths of time. In this case, we use for:

They lived in Edinburgh for four years.

Last weekend my husband, I and 2 friends we visited thousand islands. Saturday at 8am We took the train during 45min, shanghai to Hangzhou. When we arrived to hangzhou We booked a black car to own hotel, Sheraton hotel. The journey it during 2 hours 30 minutes. We check in our rooms and the hotel upgrate our rooms. Instead of view on garden we had the view to the lake. Good new but after the joy changed to/ became disappointement/ disillusion when the receptionist informed us than the outdoor swimming pool was closed. We chose this expensive hotel only for the view and the swimming pool so we screamed/ complain because no information on the website. He explained to us it’s the fault of government

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Last weekend 2 friends, my husband and I visited Thousand Islands. Saturday at 8am We took the train for 45min, shanghai to Hangzhou.

TBC

When we arrived to hangzhou We booked a black car to own hotel, Sheraton hotel. The journey it during 2 hours 30 minutes. We check in our rooms and the hotel upgrate our rooms. Instead of view on garden we had the view to the lake. Good news but after the joy changed to/ became disappointement/ disillusion when the receptionist informed us than the outdoor swimming pool was closed. We chose this expensive hotel only for the view and the swimming pool so we screamed/ complain because no information on the website. He explained to us it’s the fault of government.

…He decided to every hotel open the outdoor only 15th of July.