F2F Class Notes (Celeste) [W]

Grammar

Jason: My brother told me if I have another child I will feel more pressure.
Celeste: Your brother told you “if you have another child…” which (and) you do, “you will have more pressure” which you do.

Parents need to stay with their children when they in the period of the grow up.
They need more patience, concern and communication, the psychologist said that. But,when they make mistake, parents always feel very angry and punish them.
I think communication can help children to improve and solve some questions that their parents required, however they aren’t absolute.

Edited

Parents need to stay with their children when they are in the period of growing up.
Psychologists say parents need more patience, care and communication. But, when children make mistakes, parents always feel very angry and punish them.
I think communication can help children to improve and fix their behaviour and solve some problems, however communication/that isn’t always absolute.

Upgraded Vocab 

Parents need to raise their children when they are growing up (to be good people/citizens.)
Psychologists say parents need more patience, care and communication. But, when children make mistakes, parents always get upset/lose their temper and punish them.
I think communication can help children to improve/fix their behaviour and solve some problems, however communication/that isn’t always the answer /the key/absolute.

I like to read history book, and I think people can get a lot of useful things, such as experience, knowledge, even include a chat topic. When you read large quantity books, you can image some special person or dynasty in the past. That’s very interesting!
I like reading Chinese and Japanese history books, I also bought some European books, but I didn’t yet read them.

Edited

I like to read history books because I think people can gain a lot of useful things, such as experience, knowledge, including a good dinner table topic. When you read a large quantity of books, you can imagine some special people or dynasties in the past. That’s very interesting!
I like reading Chinese and Japanese history books, I also bought some European history books, but I haven’t yet read them.