F2F Class Notes April 27th (Ben)
Vocabulary
范围 scope
If you can put on number on it, you can speak of range = for data, for things with fixed amounts like number of customers, ways to do something, etc.
The scope of my work is very wide.
Tigers have a wide range of hunting techniques.
insist on 坚持
She suggested to give up, but I insisted on trying.
I wanted to leave, but my mom insisted that I stayed.
a commission 提成
Original
When I came into a new team everything is new for me. New working style of the team and new relationship of members.
I need study more than three new data count software and contact with new material website.
I need study power point skills and writing business email skills ,it’s hard to me.
My clients are foreigners,in my position to deliver clients’ ideas be clearly and immediately is very important.
Edited version
I have joined a new team and now everything is new for me. It has a new working style and new relationships between members.
I need to study more than three new data count software programs and contact materials websites
I need to study power point skills and writing business email skills ,it’s hard for me.
My clients are foreigners. In my position, to deliver clients’ ideas be clearly and immediately is very important.
- 每个句子都应该有一个主语和一个动词
- 换时态应该有清楚的原因 (比如说now, later, before, 2 years ago, 等等)
- 可数名词：a, the, 复数 或 my
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