F2F Class Notes 3rd May (Celeste) [S/W]***

Write a short story about communication between you and your children. Give real examples.

Next Class: Upgrade the story below to be more native.

In that time we just wait some government department to check our truck They will give us a license and we can drive on the way. So we wait them from 8 o’clock to 13 o’clock. After they came here just take a photo then told us you can went/go away.

Edited

From 8AM to 1PM my colleague and I  just waited for some government officials to check our truck in a parking lot. They took a picture of our truck, took the old license, and told us we can leave/go. We cannot drive the truck until we get a new license. After 3 to 5 days they will give us a new license and then we can drive the truck.

Parents need to stay with their children when they in the period of the grow up.
They need more patience, concern and communication, the psychologist said that. But,when they make mistake, parents always feel very angry and punish them.
I think communication can help children to improve and solve some questions that their parents required, however they aren’t absolute.

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Parents need to stay with their children when they are in the period of growing up.
Psychologists say parents need more patience, care and communication. But, when children make mistakes, parents always feel very angry and punish them.
I think communication can help children to improve and fix their behaviour and solve some problems, however communication/that isn’t always absolute.