F2F Class Notes 28th March (Celeste)[W]***

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Review

If some big project don’t have good organized maybe it will fail.  – If some big projects do not have good organization maybe they will fail. / If some big projects are disorganized maybe they will fail.

The original humans are similar to chimpanzees.

What is an effective study method for you?

Going to SE is an effective method or way to learn or improve my English.

I think most companies’ bosses are efficient.

Grammar

Present Perfect: I have worked at this company for 4 years.

Present Perfect Progressive: I have been working at this company for four years.

Vocabulary

vodka – fu te jia

eg. I like to drink vodka cocktails.

On average, Celeste gives 8 classes per work day.

On average, Sherry gives 2 sales presentations per work day.

apprenticeship n. – a person who works for another in order to learn a trade

eg. Celeste’s husband did not graduate from high school and he did not go to university. Instead, he made an apprenticeship when he was 15 years old where he learned to become a pastry chef.

Presentation
Hi, I am Sherry, I am glad to talk about presentation. On presentation, I am a real estate agent, The average of making sales presentation is about two times per work day. I think maybe I have made hundreds of presentations so far.
Until now,I do not think that I can do it perfectly,It needs a long period practicing and proving. In the past few years, I have made a lot of mistakes in presentation, for example: When I introduced the first step about my project and then I was nervous for forgot next step what things I should to say; on other satiation, when I show my project to a crowd of clients or leaders, I do not have enough confidence and just wanted to finish my job quickly, so I just speech without any eyes contact and reaction. You can imagine it , a failed job I did.
However, a good thing is that I can do it better now and not easy to feel nervous or freeze up.
Now, we have learned this essay how to make a good presentation. It is very useful. For me, the very important points are always force on your audience and make sure you said that really are they want to know, or else you may doing a unused job.

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Presentation
Hi, I am Sherry, I am glad/happy/excited to talk about presentations. I am a real estate agent so/therefore, I give a lot of presentations. I  make an average of two sales presentations per work day. I think maybe I have made hundreds of presentations so far.
Until now, I do not think that I can do it perfectly because they need a long period of practicing and improving. In the past few years, I have made a lot of mistakes while giving presentations, for example: Once, I introduced the first step of my project and then I was so nervous that I forgot the next step and what I should say.

In another situation, when I showed my project to a crowd of clients or managers/bosses, I did not have enough confidence and just wanted to finish my job quickly, so I just spoke without any eye contact and reaction. You can imagine, I failed this presentation.

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However, a good thing is that I can do it better now and not easy to feel nervous or freeze up.
Now, we have learned this essay how to make a good presentation. It is very useful. For me, the very important points are always force on your audience and make sure you said that really are they want to know, or else you may doing a unused job.