F2F Class Notes 27th March (Celeste)[S]***

Read the edited story below. Write a story about when you were in university.

Review

We go to nursery when we was children.  – We went to nursery when we were children.

My primary school is in Suzhou.

At my high school I met my best friend.

In university , I always played with my friends and didn’t go to class.

My customers are Chinese.

When we at weekend we have a lot of freedom. – When it’s the weekend, we have a lot of freedom.

Grammar

When it’s Monday, everyone is sad because the weekend is over.

When it’s Tuesday, everyone is ok.

When it’s Wednesday, Candice goes to learn English.

When it’s Thursday, everyone is excited because the weekend is coming.

When it’s Friday, everyone looks forward to getting off work.

When it’s the weekend, I relax and do some shopping.

My friend visited me from Beijing. / My friend from Beijing visited me.

Two friends visited me slept at hotel and we have lunch and go to bar.

We go to bar to drink champagne and talk. We have a lot of fun.

Yesterday I met with my friend at restaurant and we talk about work life and everything.

They back today. They take airplane come back in 6 PM.

Yesterday, they back today.

Roki is a boy and Vivi is a girl. They go to  Shanghai for a business trip.

Edited

Yesterday, My friends visited me from Beijing. / My friends from Beijing visited me yesterday. One friend is Roki, a guy, and Vivi, a girl. They came to  Shanghai for a business trip.They stayed at Swissotel Grand Shanghai which is near Smart English in Jing’an. Yesterday, we had lunch at a Japanese restaurant in Jing’an and went to a bar in Pudong where we drank champagne and talked. We had a lot of fun. We talked about work, life, and everything. They will take a plane back to Beijing today at 6 PM.