F2F Class Notes 25th April (Celeste) [W]

Upgraded Vocab

My mother and my father are typical parents. They are the same as all parents. They both love me.

The best memory I have of my father is on my wedding day. There is one wedding ritual when the bride’s father gives a speech to all / gives a speech to the guests.

My father prepared one and tried to give his speech without his notes. But when the host passed/gave the microphone to my father, he was nervous and couldn’t speak he just told us to enjoy the night/ he was nervous and speechless, he just said to enjoy the evening.

I understand my father, I know how and who he is. He isn’t good at expressing himself, my father never/rarely shows his emotions, he doesn’t express/tell them. He acts instead of speaking. So my father always told me “actions speak louder than words.”

When I call my dad he doesn’t say, “I love you,” but instead he sends me money which I refuse. When he does this, I know that this is him showing me that he loves me. 

Sometimes, he doesn’t say anything and he doesn’t do anything. Some people think he is hesitant but I know he has a plan in his head that he keeps to himself. 

He is thoughtful and sometimes overthinks things. If you overthink about everything, you will hesitate. If I see cheap tickets for a trip, I don’t overthink it, I don’t hesitate, I just buy them and go.

Anyway I love my daddy. I am a little like my dad, I sometimes hesitate. / I hesitate a little. My wedding day was a big day for me and my father’s speech is a deep memory in my head/heart.

About my mother, she is very capable. She can take care of our big family, she always plans our parties and keeps optimistic. My deep memory of my childhood is my mother’s cooking. Since I was a child, I prefer to eat my mom’s cooking more than go out.

I want tell you the new progress of my job what I moved to a new team that I hoped.
I need improve my english level like keep remember more professional advertising words and short sentences.
If I have an english PPT brief , can I send a draft to SE online service to let my teachers edit it ?

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I want to tell you about the new progress of my job. I moved to a new team that I hoped to work with.
I need to improve my English level by using more professional advertising vocabulary and communicating in short/clear/concise/direct sentences.
If I have an English PPT brief, can I send a draft to SE online service to have my teachers edit it?

OR

can I send a draft to SE online service to get my teachers’ help?

can I send a draft to SE online service to ask my teachers to correct it?

three is a crowd

The first time my son with us enjoy the film together.
Yesterday my husband and I were took my son rode an electric bike went to the park.My son was stand in front of my husband, I was sat behind my husband on the electric bike.We know the behavior is dangerous. but if we drive a car to the park it’s too hard to find a parking space and public traffic is inconvenient around my home.
My husband was rode the electric bike slowly. I think 5 minutes at most my son was fell asleep. That’s perfect! Because let my son to take a nap is very very difficult, he didn’t want to take a break even he is too tired, He is always full of energy. We wanted to the pizza house to had a afternoon tea originally. But the place was packed .So we have a big decision to enjoy a film because the cinema’s chairs are comfortable than coffee shops chairs. From my son was born my husband and I didn’t enjoy two people of the world, so we didn’t see the film by two person in the cinema.
When my son was waked up in the cinema, my husband and I felt nervous, We worried about him and afraid of he would cry. In fact when he wake up he enjoyed the movie<The Fast and the Furious> with us. That’s wonderful, we were too underestimate of him.

Edited

Yesterday was the first time my son enjoyed a film with us.
Yesterday my husband and I took my son to the park on an electric scooter . My son was standing in front of my husband, and I  sat behind my husband on the electric scooter.We know this behavior is dangerous. But if we drive a car to the park it’s too hard to find a parking space and public traffic is inconvenient around my home.
My husband drove the electric bike slowly. I think after 5 minutes my son was fell asleep. That’s perfect! Because getting my son to take a nap is very very difficult, he never wants to take a break even when he is too tired, he is always full of energy. We wanted to go to the pizza house to have a afternoon tea originally. But the place was packed .So we had a big decision to make and decided to enjoy a film because the cinema’s chairs are more comfortable than  coffee shops chairs. Before my son was born my husband and I could enjoy the movies every time. Now it is difficult to enjoy the cinema with our son.

When my son was woke up in the cinema, my husband and I felt nervous, we worried about him and we were afraid that he would cry. Actually, when he woke up he enjoyed the movie, The Fast and the Furious, with us. That was wonderful, we underestimated him.

Pronunciation

packet vs. packed (pack – t)