F2F Class Notes 11th April (Celeste)
Next Class: Continue editing the story below.
Vocabulary
My best friend and her husband had met more than 10 years. – My best friend and her husband had met more than 10 years ago.Â
My friend and I met 10 years ago. = Many years ago we had met each other.
My husband and I met in kindergarten but we didn’t see each other again until we were in college.Â
When we were in our junior year of college we dated for 2 years. Then after we graduated we got married.
1st year of college – freshman
2nd year of college – sophomore (USA) / second year
3rd year of college – junior
4th year of college – senior
Writing exercise
My mother and my father are common parents. They as same as other parents. They all loves me.
The deepest memory about my father is my weeding day . There is one of weeding spousal is bride father have a speech to all relatives and friends. My father prepared that and improved speech. But when the host let my father to have his beginning , my father was nervous and canât say any words, just told us enjoy tonight. I understand my father, i know him. He didnât good at express, my father always did everything instead of watching or speaking. So my father told me when you want to do everything before you must have a plan.Sometimes I didnât agree that, everything you think about more, you will be hesitate. If you want to have a trip, you canât say go you go . Anyway I love my daddy, although I like my dad and have a little hesitated. The weeding day is a big day for me and about my fatherâs speech is a deep memory in my head.
About my mother ,she is very capable. she can deal with everything about our big family and keeps optimist. The deep memory in my childhood is my motherâs cooking . Until now I prefer to eat at home more than go outside.
Edited version
My mother and my father are common parents. They are the same as other parents. They all loveme.
The deepest memory about my father is my wedding day . There is one of wedding moment whenthe brideâs father has a speech to all relatives and friends.
My father prepared that and tried to give his speech without his notes. But when the host let my father to have his beginning , my father was nervous and couldnât say any words, he just told us toenjoy the night.
I understand my father, I know him. He isnât good at expressing himself, my father always actsinstead of watching or speaking. So my father told me âif you want to do anything, you must firsthave a plan.â
Sometimes I didnât agree with that in the past, everything you think about more, you will behesitate. If you want to have a trip, you canât say go you go . Anyway I love my daddy, although I like my dad and have a little hesitated. The wedding day is a big day for me and about my fatherâs speech is a deep memory in my head.
About my mother ,she is very capable. she can deal with everything about our big family and keeps optimist. The deep memory in my childhood is my motherâs cooking . Until now I prefer to eat at home more than go outside.
Upgraded Vocab
My mother and my father are typical parents. They are the same as all parents. They both love me.
The best memory I have of my father is on my wedding day. There is one wedding ritual when the bride’s father gives a speech to all / gives a speech to the guests.
My father prepared one and tried to give his speech without his notes. But when the host passed/gave the microphone to my father, he was nervous and couldnât speak he just told us to enjoy the night/ he was nervous and speechless, he just said to enjoy the evening.
I understand my father, I know how and who he is. He isnât good at expressing himself, my father always acts instead of observing/watching or speaking. So my father told me âif you want to do anything, you must first have a plan.â
In the past, I sometimes didnât agree with that, if you overthink about everything, you will hesitate. If you see cheap tickets for a trip, don’t hesitate,  just go. Anyway I love my daddy, although I am a little like my dad, I hesitate. The wedding day is a big day for me and about my fatherâs speech is a deep memory in my head.
TBC
About my mother ,she is very capable. she can deal with everything about our big family and keeps optimist. The deep memory in my childhood is my motherâs cooking . Until now I prefer to eat at home more than go outside.
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