Email Service Notes (Tony)

Demo StudentJason S

Your Original Email

appreciate

I appreciate that you face a really serious situation,and you should make right decision as soon as possible(you can)（Can i use “you can” to instead of possible in this sentence?）

I appreciate that you gave me a lot of help.

I hope my property will appreciate 10% in this year.

consider

I tell to myself that is need to consider more things and details, when I want to make big decision.

If you want to get a good performance, you should consider to you own studying

esteem

I hope that you can show me a right esteem to solve this problem.

regard

People regard the government to protect the air environment and punish someone who is polluted it

respect

I respect that I can throw the examinatin of my car license.

asset

If he study continue, he’ll be a asset to the country.

The company has a lot of assets,they can sell them to get money.

depreciation

When you buy a new car, it will be depreciation

degradation

Someone in degradation that is fired from company

When a factory bought some machines that is in a degradation

Your Edited Email

appreciate

I appreciate that you are facing a really serious situation, and you should make the right decision as soon as you possibly can (you can)（Can i use “you can” to instead of possible in this sentence? Yes, See above.）

I appreciate that you gave me a lot of help.

I hope my property will appreciate 10% this year.

consider

I tell myself that I need to consider more details, when I want to make a big decision.

If you want to improve, you should consider studying on your own.

esteem

I hope that you can show me a right esteem to solve this problem. ???  (This word does not really work in this sentence)

regard

People regard the government as the protector of the environment and punish someone who is polluting it.

respect

I respect that I can throw the examinatin of my car license. (Doesn’t make sense, ask teacher for help)

asset

If he continues studying, he’ll be an asset to the country.

The company has a lot of assets, they can sell them to get money.

depreciation

When you buy a new car, it will depreciate

degradation

Someone in degradation that is fired from company ??? (RE DO With teacher)

When a factory bought some machines  the state of degradation they were in made them unusable.