Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email

Hi Tony,
Hope you are good today.
The weather today is not such good as yesterday, it is a windy and rainy day. Well, find other things that make me happy.
Today, I’d like to talk about my daughter who is 3.5 years old, very lovely. When I back home after one day’s work, she helps me to open the door and run to me, hug me and kiss me, and says “Mommy I love you, could you play with me?” I am always hungry that time so tell her: “sorry, honey, Mommy is hungry so do you mind let me have the supper first” “fine, Mommy, I can enjoy the food with you together”
After the supper, we will play together, build the blocks, read the books, sometimes do the handwork. We are very happy when we play together but sometimes I have to work overtime, she said: Mommy, do you love me? why you don’t play with me. I never angry even she cry, makes noise or disturb me to work, I know this time is for her.
As a working mother, balance the work and life is very important. I have not in a high-level position yet in Company so I spend a lot time to improve myself to climb higher, that properly impact on my family due to the limited time. I guess most of the working mother face this kind of challenge.

Thanks
Amy

Patio: my house has a big patio where I always invite my friends on for the family party

Your Edited Email

Hi Tony,
Hope you are good today.
The weather today is not as good as yesterday, it is a windy and rainy day. Well, I guess I will find other things that make me happy.
Today, I’d like to talk about my daughter who is 3.5 years old and very lovely. When I get back home after a day’s work, she helps me open the door and runs to me, hugs me and kisses me, and says “Mommy I love you, could you play with me?” I am always hungry that time so tell her: “sorry, honey, Mommy is hungry so do you mind let me have supper first” “fine, Mommy, I can enjoy the food with you”
After supper, we will play together, with blocks, reading books, or sometimes doing homework. We are very happy when we play together but sometimes I have to work overtime, she said: Mommy, do you love me? why you don’t play with me. I never get angry even when she cries, makes noise or disturbs me while I’m working, I know this time is for her.
As a working mother, balancing work and life is very important. I am not in a high-level position yet in my Company. So I spend a lot time improving myself to climb higher. Even though it has an impact on my family time. I guess most of the working mothers face this kind of challenge.

Thanks
Amy

Patio: my house has a big patio where I always invite my friends for family parties

Good Writing Amy,

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