Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email: 

I‘m so sorry to tell you about the outdoor campaign in June has been changed the on air date.
I‘m so sorry to tell you about the outdoor campaign in June has been changed the on air location.
The reason is original location has been sold out by another client. We have to find another on line location instead of.
Will you agree to extend the campaign period until there has no client booked？
Will you agree to change the advertising on line location ?
Please let me know which solution is more prefer to choice， extend period or change on line location.
I’m glad to let you know, The TVC was passed final review by CCTV, The NBA Finals campaign will be on line.

Your Corrected Email:

We regret to inform you that the air date for outdoor campaign TVC in June has been changed.

Unfortunately the original spot has been booked by another client. We have to find another online spot instead.
Could you agree to extend the campaign period until there is an available spot?
Also, could you agree to change the advertising online location ?
Please let me know which solution is preferable， extending the period or changing the on line location.
I’m glad to let you know, The TVC has passed the final review by CCTV, The NBA Finals campaign will be on line.

What do you mean by …?

on line?

location?

I’m not exactly sure what you mean with those words.