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If I were a pirate (lilyl)
A strong wind blow on my face when I stand in the big ship to look far away from the distance, feeling curious and mysterious about the future. It was my a scenery occurred in my mind when I thought if I were a pirate.
In the Pirates of the Caribbean,Jack pursuing freedom through adventure. Ultimately he will be free , a privateer in the employ of England. The way he lived is also my ideal life, which fulling of unknowns and pursuing for the freedom.
Everyday I woke up, my partner and me may research the world map and go to somewhere to look for measures.when come across the big ship ,we will rob of the rich merchants and get a mount of money and food.Then, we may make another plan to search for a undiscovered mainland.Actually ,I know that some cruel massacre will be happen sometimes, but I will not weld my weapon unless other people want to hurt me.
In the voyage of my life, nowhere is destination. I hope nothing but freedom and adventure. What is tomorrow? Maybe robbing, maybe fighting and dead, or maybe settle down in a remote land, no one can get a certain question. There is my pirate life, fulling of freedom and hope.

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If I were a pirate (lilyl)
A strong wind blows on my face when I stand on the big ship to look far away in the distance, feeling curious and mysterious about the future. It was the scenery in my mind when I thought if I were a pirate.
In the Pirates of the Caribbean, Jack pursues freedom through adventure. Ultimately he will be free , a privateer in the employ of England. The way he lived is also my ideal life, which was filled with unknowns and pursuing freedom.
Everyday I woke up, my partner and me may check the world map and go somewhere to look for treasure. When we come across a big ship ,we will rob the rich merchants and get a mountain of money and food. Then, we may make another plan to search for an undiscovered continent. Actually, I know that some cruel massacre will happen sometimes, but I will not wield my weapon unless other people want to hurt me.
In the voyage of my life, nowhere is the destination. I hope for nothing but freedom and adventure. What does tomorrow hold? Maybe robbing, maybe fighting and death, or maybe settle down on a remote land, no one can be certain. This is my pirate life, full of freedom and hope.