Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email

I live in Baoshan district because the rent is cheaper and at the mean time the house is better than most houses in the city center. It is pretty far between my house and my office so everyday I have to spend a long time in the metro. My eyes are not very good and my doctor told me that I had to wear glasses as often as I can, however I don’t like my glasses, it makes my nose uncomfortable. Probably I need to go some shops to get a new pair of glasses. Due to this, I can’t read books or watch movies in the metro for such this long time. The only thing that I can do in the metro is to listen something.

Your Edited Email

I live in Baoshan district because the rent is cheaper and for the time being the house is better than most houses in the city center. It is pretty far between my house and my office, so everyday I have to spend a long time in the metro. My vision is not very good and my doctor told me that I have to wear glasses as often as I can, however I don’t like my glasses, they make my nose hurt. Probably I need to go some shops to get a new pair of glasses. Due to this, I can’t read books or watch movies in the metro during that long commute. The only thing that I can do in the metro is to listen to something.