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Your Original Email

[Business writing: I want this to be concise and formal]

New national standard is expected to further standardize the water purifier market and promote the high-end market

1. New national standard regulates the clean water production rate to be at least 35%, eliminating some non-standard players without mature technique
2. Water efficiency is required to be marked on water purifiers, becoming one of the key purchasing criteria for end customer
3. Strict regulation is expected to promote the high-end market and increase the average price of water purifier industry

Growth rate of new sales volume is estimated to slow down to 15% in the near-to-mid term

No new technology is expected to substitute HEPA filters in the foreseeable future

Your Edited Email

[Business writing: I want this to be concise and formal]

A new national standard is expected to further standardize the water purifier market and promote high-end products.

1. The New national standard regulates clean water production to yield at least 35%, eliminating some non-standard players without proper processes.
2. Water efficiency is required to be marked on water purifiers, becoming one of the key purchasing criteria for end customers
3. Strict regulation is expected to promote the high-end market and increase the average price of water purifiers.

The growth rate of new sales volume is estimated to slow down to 15% in the near-to-mid term

No new technology is expected to substitute HEPA filters in the foreseeable future