Email Service Notes (Tony)

Your Original Email


Dear both,
I’d like to make an appointment with you or your technology engineers on 8th or 9th, June in your office with my Germany colleagues, Mr. Günther Teichmann and Mr. Carsten Stegmann who are the Director Business Unit Industrial Technology and Ms. Helen Hao from Halfen China. The main purpose is to know the application of HALFEN products in your projects and any feedbacks or advises from your side. Could you pls schedule for it?

Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Mark Sun

Your Edited Email


To whom it may concern,
I’d like to make an appointment with you or one of your engineers on 8th or 9th, June in your office with my German colleagues Mr. Günther Teichmann and Mr. Carsten Stegmann who are the Directors of Business Unit Industrial Technology and Ms. Helen Hao from Halfen China. The main purpose would be to familiarize ourselves with the application process of HALFEN products in your projects and collect any feedback or advice from your side.

Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Mark Sun