Email Service Notes (Samara)

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. What work do you do?
2. Do many people in your country choose to do that type of work?
3. What are your responsibilities at work?
4. Do you remember your first day at work?
5.How did you feel on your first day at work?

I am a sales assistant in a foreign company. I have worked here for 6 years. When I was a students of the last year of college, I started looking for job. This is a suitable position for girls which is sttled and needn’t work ovretime. As a intern,I leared much more than others. I was resbonsiable for administration in the sales department. After I became a formal employee, I was charge of prossing all kinds of sales data. I always processed data whole day at the end of month. I was so happy because I learned many skills of this job and colleages are friendly. I remember the first day when I enter the company, I was so nervous because I don’t know whether I could be qualified for the work. There is a kindly girls who introduce the sales department and help me to solve some defficult problems. I am very glad to meet my colleages and I hope all of us everthing will be good.

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I am a sales assistant for a foreign company. I have worked here / with themfor 6 years. When I was in my last year of college / during my senior year of college, I started looking for a job. A sales assistant is a suitable position for girls which are settled and needn’t work overtime. As an intern, I learnedmuch more than others. I was responsible for administration in the sales department. After I became a formal employee, I was charged /given the assignment of processing all kinds of sales data. I always processed data for whole day at the end of month. I was so happy because I learned many skills of this job and my colleagueswerefriendly. I remember the first day when I entered / started at / joined  / the company, I was so nervous because I didn’t know whether I would be qualified for the work. There were somekindly girls who introducedthe sales department to me  / trained me  / helped me acclimate myself and helpedme to solve some difficultproblems. I am very glad I met mycolleagues and I hope everything will be good between all of us.

Vocabulary:
Acclimate: to become accustomed / to learn a new climate or environment.