Email Service Notes (Samara)

Your Original Email

Thanks for introduce @Lachlan Rentell

Hi David,

Greetings from Regional Shangahi office Melody.
It’s great to heard that you interesting to bring the potential opportunity into our Minor Hotels globally.
China is currently one of the major development destination of minor hotels, we now have Anantara Xishuangbanna Resort and Anantara Guiyang Resort, on the end of this year we are planning to open the first Tivoli and Oaks at Chengdu.

Please see the attachments information for our Hotel list for your reference.

And please let me know how we can promote for MICE opportunities.
Thanks

Melody

Your Edited Email

Thanks for the introduction @Lachlan Rentell

Hi David,

Greetings from our regional Shanghai office my name is Melody.
It was great to hear that you are interested in bringing your potential opportunity into our Minor Hotels and you are expanding globally.
China is currently one of the major development destinations of minor hotels, we (who is we? Is the name of the company Regional?) now have an Anantara Xishuangbanna Resort and an Anantara Guiyang Resort, at the end of this year we are planning to open the first Tivoli and Oaks in Chengdu.

Please see the attached document, our Hotel List for your reference.

And please let me know how we can further promote MICE opportunities.

Kindest Regards,  /  Looking forward to our partnership

Melody
(Job title)
(company name)
(office phone number)

Editing questions from Samara:

• Is “Minor Hotels” the name of your company? When you capitalize the first letters in “minor hotels” it means that it is the official name of something.
• Who is “we”? What is your company name?

Here is a chart of rules and examples of “in”, “on”, and “at” .