Email Service Notes (Samara)
Your Original Email
Thanks for introduce @Lachlan Rentell
Greetings from Regional Shangahi office Melody.
Itâs great to heard that you interesting to bring the potential opportunity into our Minor Hotels globally.
China is currently one of the major development destination of minor hotels, we now have Anantara Xishuangbanna Resort and Anantara Guiyang Resort, on the end of this year we are planning to open the first Tivoli and Oaks at Chengdu.
Please see the attachments information for our Hotel list for your reference.
And please let me know how we can promote for MICE opportunities.
Your Edited Email
Thanks for the introductionÂ @Lachlan Rentell
Greetings from our regional Shanghai office my name isÂ Melody.
It wasÂ great to hear that you are interestedÂ in bringingÂ your potential opportunity into our Minor Hotels and you are expanding globally.
China is currently one of the major development destinations of minor hotels, weÂ (who is we? Is the name of the company Regional?)Â now have an Anantara Xishuangbanna Resort and an Anantara Guiyang Resort,Â at the end of this year we are planning to open the first Tivoli and Oaks in Chengdu.
Please see the attachedÂ document,Â our Hotel List for your reference.
And please let me know how we can furtherÂ promote MICE opportunities.
Kindest Regards, Â / Â LookingÂ forward to our partnership
(office phone number)
Editing questions from Samara:
- Is “Minor Hotels” the name of your company? When you capitalize the first letters in “minor hotels” it means that it is the official name of something.
- Who is “we”? What is your company name?
Here is a chart of rules and examples of “in”, “on”, and “at” .
|MonthsÂ||Cities and countries|
|In January||In Tokyo|
|In October||In Japan|
|Seasons||Rooms and Buildings|
|In the Summer||In the kitchen|
|In the Spring||In the supermarket|
|In 2004||In the car|
|in 1988||In a park|
|Time of the day|
|In the morning|
|In the evening|
|exception : at night|
|Times||Situation / context|
|At 6:00||At school|
|At half past three||At work|
|At noon||At a party|
|Dates and days||Transportation|
|On Monday||On the bus|
|On February 14th||On a bike|
|exception: In a car|
|On a table|
|On the wall|