Email Service Notes (Samara)

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To Tibo,
As we talked about my BJ trip last week, let me tell you what I think of BJ this time. But this time it is not about expectations, it is about feelings.
We were on a 9:00 a.m. flight, so I got an early bed. it was hard for me and I almost missed my flight. We have a little mission for this trip-to make a v-log. Because my friend wanted to study post-production.
All in all, it was a great trip. We had some really good restaurants. At noon on the frist day we went to a roast dusk restaurant called Sijiminfu. This was the best roast duck I’ve ever had. The skin of the roast duck was moist and crispy, it was really good with a lean duck meat roll in a thin pastry. Yeah, I’m practically drooling right now. the Beijing fried noodles with soy sauce in this restaurant was also very delicious. And salt and pepper prawns, roast lamb filet. I’ll eat at this restaurant again next time I go to BJ. In the evening we went to a barbecue restaurant called Kuandian. The kebabs here were cheap and delicious. The specialty of this shop is chili oil mashed potatoes. This was so good.
I think I kind of like BJ this time. BJ is rougher than SH. People in BJ are very enthusiastic. SH feels empty to me. In SH, everyone is dress delicate and seems to be in a great hurry. But in BJ, everything is freedom.

Thanks,
Chenglin

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To Tibo,
As we talked about my BJ trip last week, let me tell you what I think of BJ this time. But this time it is not about expectations, it is about feelings.
The flight was for 9:00 a.m. so I went to bed early. It was hard for me to get there on timeand I almost missed my flight. We hada little mission for this trip-to make a v-log. Because my friend wantsto study post-production.
All in all, it was a great trip. We visited some really nice / tasty restaurants. At noon on the first day we went to a roast dusk restaurant called Sijiminfu. This was the best roast duck I’ve ever had. The skin of the roast duck was moist and crispy, it was really good with a lean duck meat roll in a thin pastry. Yeah, I’m practically drooling right now. TheBeijing fried noodles with soy sauce in this restaurant werealso very delicious. We also tried the salt and pepper prawns androast lamb filet. I’ll eat at this restaurant again next time I go to BJ. In the evening we went to a barbecue restaurant called Kuandian. The kebabs here were cheap and delicious / flavorful/ delightful / delectable. The shop’s specialty was chili oil mashed potatoes, itwas so good / delectable / satisfying.
I think I kind of liked my trip to BJ this time around / this trip made me like BJ more than I have before. BJ is rougher(tougher / more crowded / much bigger )than SH. People in BJ are very enthusiastic. SH feels empty / cold / impersonableto me. In SH, everyone dressesdelicatelyand seems to be in a great hurry. But in BJ, everything is freedom / more relaxed / feels more free.

Thanks,
Chenglin