Email Service Notes (Samara)

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Five years ago, we were sports students. I still clearly remember that day how we can meet each other and from that time we have been best friends.It was the first time to training at the playground. Her father and my parents were talking with our coach.Both of us to running.During running, I found that she was a shy girl, but my personality was different to her.So I thought maybe we can’t to be friend.But the fact tells me that I was wrong.Although there was many different, long time later we can learn many thing from each other.I’m lucky to meet her.

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Five years ago, we were athelets. I still clearly remember that day how we would meet each other since then we have been best friends. It was the first time to training at the playground. Her (Who’s father?) father and my parents were talking with our coach. Both of us were running. During the run / while we ran, I found / realized that she was a shy girl, but my personality was different than hers. So I thought maybe we couldn’t be friends. But the fact of our friendship  tells me that I was wrong. Although there were many differences, over time we learned many things from each other / one another. I’m lucky to know her / I was lucky to meet her.