Email Service Notes (Samara)

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1.What do you usually do with your friends?
2. How long have you known your best friend?
3.What do you (and your best friend) usually do together?
4.Do you think friendship is important?
5.Are friends more important than family? (Why?)

I have four best girlfriends. I have known them for more than 10 years. We are in the same school but not in the same class. When we were students, we often go to school together. We usually go to library to finish our homework, and do a part-time job in the summer vacation. As soon as we got the salary, we spent money on what we wanted to buy. Friends are important for me because we grew up together even if we didn’t go to the same college but we still have a good relationship so far. When I was failure in the exam or I was disappointed in love, they always beside me. I think friends are as important as parents. Family gives me a better life and friendship give me happiness and warm.

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I have four best girlfriends / best friends.I have known them for more than 10 years. We are in the same school / we go to the same school, but not in the same class / we aren’t in the same class. When we were younger, we often would go to school together. We usually went to the library to finish our homework, and do a part-time job duringsummer vacation. As soon as we got our salaries, we spent money on what we wanted to buy.My friends are important for me because we grew up together, even if we all don’t go to the same college, we still have a good relationship so far. When failed myexam or I was disappointed in love, they always stood / stayed / werebeside me. I think friends are as important as parents. Family gives me a better life and friendship give me happiness and warmth.