Email Service Notes (Samara)

Your Original Email

About my part time job, I just want to say that it’s pain and happy. I usually worked for 4hrs or 5hrs and stand all the time that I can’t drink and eat. Let me know many things from the first job. I like it and hate it. Because an incident that I was fired by the location manager. Until now I still think I have no mistake just argue with her and let her mood was terrible…

Your Edited Email

About my part time job, I just want to say that it was painful, but happy. I usually worked for 4hrs or 5hrs and stood all the time and I couldnt drink or eat. This job taught me so many things about life, this was my first job experience. I liked it and hated it. Because of a sudden incident, I was fired by the location manager. Until now I still think I made no mistake. I just argued with her and made her mood terrible…

Wonderful story I look forward to more of your writing! 
– Samara