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Working collaboration

Of all the components depicted in the drawing, the most eye-catching is that two people all just have a single leg, but when they hug with each other they became a small two-person team. They can go all over the world. Hence, what the picture intends to imply is working collaboration that even though everyone maybe have a little bit disadvantages, putting them into a whole team, the effect of complementary will happen.

In fact, this kind of phenomenon is no uncommon nowadays in our society. Considering the significance of the present situation, it is necessary to point out the cause behind in. Firstly, this phenomenon could be attributed to opening thought. More and more people and companies understand that team-work is more effective and useful work method. Secondly, everyone has different idea and skill, they can complement to finish a goal together. for instance, one person has business skill, another person has English skill, if they work together, they can make the trade in the global marketing.

To working collaboration, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides. From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions. Try to make a small team to working. In the meantime, I personally believe that this skill not only can help me grow up faster than normal individually working skill, but also you can secretly learn other people’s skill or mindset when you are talking.

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Working collaboration

Of all the components depicted in the drawing, the most eye-catching one is the two people who both have only one leg. By hugging each other, they become a small two-person team and can go all over the world. Hence, what the picture intends to imply is that, even though everyone may have some kind of disadvantage, by working in collaboration and being part of a team, they can complement one another and achieve anything.

In fact, this kind of phenomenon is not uncommon in our society nowadays and, considering its significance, it is necessary to point out the causes behind it. Firstly, this phenomenon could be attributed to a process of opening up that means that more and more people and companies understand that teamwork is effective and useful. Secondly, as everyone has different ideas and skills, people can complement each other and finish a goal together. For instance, if one person has business skills, and another has English skills, if they work together they can trade in the global market.

As I see it, working collaboration requires efforts from all sides and it is particularly important that we take action and try to make our small team work. Additionally, I personally believe that teamwork not only can help me grow faster, but through the exchange of ideas, it can also help me learn other people’s skills and understand their mindset.