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Re-plan for my graduate examination

Since I had decided to prepare for graduate examination, it’s been 3 months. Chen had finished his first round review of MBA test, but I was not. These 3 months, I accomplished all the process of undergraduate graduationã€painting and some work tasks, I just spent less time for graduate examination. Last night, I realized that I just have 6 months to review. I felt nervous, there are 4 subjects I should pass, including politics, English, sketching, oil painting.
Hence, this morning I reschedule for my plan and reinforce to my aspiration.

I got some feeling of strong willing. When I was a child, I admired some very powerful people.
At that time, I thought that it was a high level which I was hard to reach. In my now opinion, as long as I work and learn hard, I will become a strong person who is my ideal person in my mind.

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Replanning for my graduate examination

It’s been 3 months since I decided to prepare for graduate examination. Chen has finished his first round of MBA tests review, but I have not. In these 3 months, I have finished the entire process of undergraduate graduation, and also did some painting and some work tasks, so I spent less time preparing for the graduate examination. Last night, I realized that I just have 6 months to review. I felt nervous, because there are 4 subjects I should pass:Politics, English, Sketching, Oil Painting. With that in mind, this morning I decided to remade my schedule and my whole plan to reinforce to my aspiration.

I got a really strong will. When I was a child, I admired some very powerful people. At that time, I thought that reaching a high was hard. Now, my opinion is that as long as I work hard and learn as much as I can, I will become a strong person, which in my mind is the ideal.