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Traffic problems in Shanghai

The huge surge of online shopping makes delivery business skyrocketing. More and more trucks drove on road to deliveries our parcels, and they made our traffic congested and chaos. Not only goods delivery, but also foods delivery made traffic problems. With the development of our APPs, we ordered foods from APPs instead of going to stores. So more and more motorbikes you can see on streets, and a lot of them drove illegal on streets. Sometimes due to their illegal behaviors, traffic congested. Policemen has to stand in crossroads to barred their illegal actions and people should be careful when they across streets. That is the problems of Shanghai’s traffic.

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Traffic problems in Shanghai

The huge surge on online shopping has made the delivery business skyrocket. There are more and more trucks on the road to deliver our parcels, and they make our traffic congested and chaotic. This problem is caused not only by the delivery of goods, but also food. With the development of apps, we chose to order food instead of going to stores, so there are more and more motorbikes on the streets, and a lot of them ride illegally. Sometimes, due to their illegal behavior, traffic gets congested. Policemen have to stand on crossroads to bar their illegal actions and people need to be careful when they across streets. That is a big problem when it comes to Shanghai’s traffic.