Email Service Notes (Nick)

Your Original Email

It is a thing that you want to wish your face , brush your teeth or others, there’s water coming out.

Your Edited Email

It is a thing that [if/when/because/since(?)] you want to wish your face , brush your teeth or others things/etc., [then/there must be(?)] there’s water coming out.

** In this sentence the idea is unclear because the parts are unconnected by any conjunction. Accordingly it is difficult to know exactly what you mean. Bring this into a class to discuss with a teacher.