Email Service Notes (Nick)

Your Original Email

Dear All,

Good afternoon, I am glad to inform you that we will be the first international hotel chain to grand start the Ctrip 20th anniversary campaign on 2nd September 2019.
 For a 1 day splash booking date : Sep 2, 2019 – which is also the best booking lead time for Oct China Golden week.
 Stay Date : Until end of 2019.

Thanks for your all supports for this campaign and let’s monitor the pick up together for this campaign.
Cheers,

Melody

Your Edited Email

Dear All,

Good afternoon, I am glad to inform you that we will be the first international hotel chain to grand start the Ctrip 20th anniversary campaign on the 2nd of September 2019.**
The campaign will include these elements:(is this correct? I want the purpose of these two items to be clearer)
 For a 1 day splash booking date : Sep 2, 2019 – which is also the best booking lead time for Oct China Golden week.
 Stay Date : Until end of 2019.

Thanks for your all supports for this campaign and let’s monitor the pick up progress / development / success of together for this campaign together.
Cheers,

Melody

** I am glad to inform you that our hotel will be hosting the grand opening / the kickoff for the Ctrip 20th Anniversary Campaign on September 2, 2019.