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Your Original Email
I thought that was bad feeling when I was became an older people over sixty and retired. I was afraid i did not have healthy body to do what I want to do. And I was afraid of spending all of my money about my bad healthy without self-skills.
Your Edited Email
I thought that was bad feeling when I was became a senior citizen an older people over sixty and retired. I was afraid I did not have a healthy body and wouldn’t be able to do what I want to do. And I was afraid of spending all of my money about on my bad healthy / on medical care without self-skills [I’m not sure what “self-skills” means. Bring this into a class and discuss it with a teacher!].
Senior-citizen – a person over 55, 60, or 65 (depending upon context)
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