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Health and Wealth
In my opinion, Health and wealth, they’re both important, but I think health is more important than wealth. Because health is the prerequisite for everything. If you don’t have a healthy body, you can’t do a lot of things well and this can stop you making money, so you can’t accumulate wealth. They are a lot of examples about death from overwork, including a lot of famous people. Maybe they have a mount of wealth that other people can’t compare. But we are equal when we face death. On the other hand, if we don’t have a lot of money, or we can’t find a job that can make a lot of money, our health maybe full of risk. We see a lot of patients can’t afford their medical fee, if they have a lot of money maybe they can get health soon. So this is a dialectical question. Sometimes it’s hard for us to have the best of both worlds. It’s just depend on us that we think which one is important or urgent. If we lost money, we can earn. If we lost health, we also will lost wealth, so I think health is more important than wealth.

My Opinion on Mobile Phones
Nowadays, Mobile phones are important communication tools. Especially with the advent of smartphones, and we can do a lot of things just use our phones. Except the basically functions of calling and texting, we can do a lot of other things on our phones. Like online shopping, playing games, watching movies, etc. These give us a lot of conveniences, but also got a lot of problems. First of all, use them spend us a lot of time. This is a new function on Apple which is you can check how long you face your phone in a day. One of my colleague said his was eight hours in 24 hours. I thought that was a huge time and I knew he liked playing games, so I thought he waste a lot of time on mobile phone. Second, if we don’t have a correct posture to watch our phone, that we will got a lot of body problems. The main problem is head and neck forward tilt, we call this type people is heads-down tribe or phubber. For our healthy let us refuse to be phubber.

My Plan for the Spring Festival
This Spring Festival will be my busy and pregnant Festival, because our family will move in to our new house and I designed and rebuild this new house. I haven’t finished a lot of decoration work, and I want to finish them before spring Festival, and on spring festival,we just celebrate it and enjoy spending our time in new house. I will make dumplings and bread with my families. I also will do some handwork to decorate our house, and I have a lot of old pillows and pants, maybe I can make some cushions. I have bought a lot of books but I haven’t read them, so I can use this time to read them. I will never lose my exercise, healthy is the most important thing in my life now, so I will ask my brother to play badminton with me, and I also will do some other exercises by myself. This is my plan for the Spring Festival.

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Health and Wealth
In my opinion, health and wealth are both important, but I think health is more important than wealth, because health is the prerequisite for everything. If you don’t have a healthy body, you can’t do a lot of things well and this can stop/keep you from making money, so you can’t accumulate wealth. There are a lot of/ plenty of examples of death from overwork, including a lot of famous people. Maybe they have an incomparable amount of wealth, that other people can’t compare. but we are equal when we face death. On the other hand, if we don’t have a lot of money, or we can’t find a job that can make a lot of money, our health may be full of at risk. We see a lot of patients who can’t afford their medical care. Maybe if they had a lot of money, maybe they could maintain their health soon. So this is a dialectical question conundrum / difficult question / subjective question. Sometimes it’s hard for us to have the best of both worlds. It just depends on us thatwhat we think which one is important or urgent. If we lose money, we can earn it back. However, if we lose health, we also will lose wealth, so I think health is more important than wealth.

My Opinion on Mobile Phones
Nowadays, Mobile phones are important communication tools, especially with the advent of smartphones, and we can do a lot of things just on our phones. In addition to the basically functions of calling and texting, we can do a lot of other things on our phones, like: online shopping, playing games, watching movies, etc. These give us a lot of are convenient, but also cause a lot of problems. First of all, use them  we spend us a lot of time using them. There is a new function on Apple which is that allows you to can check how long you face much you use your phone in a day. One of my colleagues said his was eight hours in out of 24 hours. I thought that was a huge amount of time, and I know he likes playing games, so I think he wastes a lot of time on his mobile phone. Second, if we don’t have a correct proper posture while using our phones, this will cause a lot of body problems. The main problem is head and neck forward tilt. We call this type of person people is “heads-down tribe” or a phubber. For our health, let us refuse to be phubbers.

My Plan for the Spring Festival
This Spring Festival I will be both busy and pregnant Festival, because our family will move in to our the new house and I designed and rebuilt this new house. I still haven’t finished a lot of decorative work, and I want to finish it before spring Festival so that during spring festival we can just celebrate it and enjoy spending our time in our new house. I will make dumplings and bread with my family. I also will do some handwork(?) to decorate our house. and I have a lot of old pillows and pants—maybe I can make some cushions. I have bought a lot of books but I haven’t read them, so I can use this time to read them. I will never neglect my exercise, because health is the most important thing in my life now. So, I will ask my brother to play badminton with me, and I also will do some other exercises by myself. This is my plan for the Spring Festival.