Email Service Notes (Nick)

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I’m writing a journal today. It’s not gonna be romantic. And, it’s not a record of what happened. Just a few things that has popped up in my head these days.

First is my marriage. I’m very satisfied with what has happened to me for the past three years. Though it took me a lot to meet my husband (and I almost gave up at that time), and I am not usually satisfied with what life can give me, he gave me a certain impression that the communication between us could be really easy, and I appreciate that.

To me a life is too long. Anything can happen. And any conflicts can arise through the process. I cherish this merit and turned it into a good trait in our marriage.

After we’ve been married for 3 years and that I’ve given birth to a kid, I’ve seen different conflicts rising in our family and was lucky to still have him by my side.

But it’s now my cousin’s turn.

She’s got a good heart as I do, but she is not as open as I am or she’s not willing to try different things that much as I am willing to.

I’m starting to worry.

Will she have a good end?

Maybe we both know that having a good heart alone is not enough to find a good life partner in this society. But I can’t change that for her.

Your Edited Email

I’m writing a journal today. It’s not gonna be romantic, and it’s not a record of what happened. Just a few things that have popped up into my head these days / Just a few random thoughts I’ve had recently.

First is my marriage. I’m very satisfied with what has happened to me for in the past three years. Though it took me a lot of effort / of searching to meet / find my husband (and I almost gave up at the time), and though I am not usually (fully) satisfied with what life can gives me, he gave me a certain impression that the communication between us could / would be really easy, and I appreciate that.

To me a life is too long. Anything can happen. And many types of conflict can arise through the process / on the way. I cherish this merit aspect of life and turned it into a good trait in our marriage.

After Now that we’ve been married for 3 years and that I’ve given birth to a kid, I’ve seen different conflicts arising in our family, and was I know that I am lucky to still have him by my side.

But it’s now my cousin’s turn.

She’s got a as good a heart as I do, but she is not as open as I am or she’s not willing to try different things that as much as I am willing to.

I’m starting to worry.

Will she have a good end? [This sounds a little like death.] / Will she find a good match?

Maybe we both know that having a good heart alone is not enough to find a good life partner in this society, but I can’t change that for her.