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Your Original Email

Dear sir,

I am Mark Sun from the Halfen Shanghai office. I am in charge of industrial sector in China. I tried to find one of your colleagues in China, but it’s failed.

I want to recommend Power Click connection system for chimerical customers during the construction of new projects or renovation projects. It is adjustable, fully flexible in positioning and dimensioning, and it is quick in assembly and adjustment to fix equipment and structural components.

It would be very appreciated if you could give me an email address of your colleague in China who is in charge of technology or procurement.

You can find more information via our website: www.halfen.cn and www.halfen.de.
Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Mark Sun

Your Edited Email

Dear sir,

I am Mark Sun from the Halfen Shanghai office. I am in charge of the industrial sector in China. I tried to find one of your colleagues in China, but it’s failed but I could not.

I want to recommend the Power Click connection system for chimerical** customers during the construction of new projects or renovation projects. It is adjustable, fully flexible in positioning and dimensioning, and it is quick and easy to assemble or adjust to fix equipment and structural components.

It would be very appreciated / I would really appreciate it if you could give me an the email address of your colleague / an email address of one of your colleagues in China who is in charge of technology or procurement.

You can find more information via our website: www.halfen.cn and www.halfen.de.
Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Mark Sun

** “Chimerical” is a very advanced word, meaning something that is dream-like, unlikely to exist, perhaps unreasonable to expect. Did you perhaps mean: “customers in the chemical industry,” or something like that?

https://www.dictionary.com/browse/chimerical