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In my spare time, I Iike to run half marathon. I enjoy running to keep healthy. Now, I run the half marathon twice a year.

I also work as a volunteer in the blood center. play with the children, color books, read stories, play games, do handcrafts. Help to tidy the playroom etc. therefore when I help people, It makes me happy. I have been working there for 7 years.

I like to travel. I have been to many places for example: Morocco, Russia, Japan and many more. Travel has made me see a lot of new things. I hope to see the world with more friends in the future.

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In my spare time, I Iike to run half marathons. I enjoy running to keep healthy, so now I run a half marathon twice a year.

I also work as a volunteer in the blood center. There I play with the children, coloring books, reading stories, playing games, and making handcrafts. I also help to tidy up the playroom after etc. therefore When I help people, it makes me happy, and this is why I have been working there for 7 years.

I also like to travel. I have been to many places, for example: Morocco, Russia, Japan and many more. Traveling has made allowed me to see a lot of new things. I hope to see the world with more friends in the future.