Email Service Notes (Nick)

Your Original Email

Anniversary
My husband gave me a Tiffany diamond ring as 10th anniversary gift.

Tuition
British’s education quality is ver high but the tuition of private school is really expensive.

Depressed
I were depressed when I couldn’t use English to communicate with foreigner.

Calm
I like practing pilates because it makes me feel heart calm .

Safety
I think Japan is the most safety country in the world.

To be quiet
We need to keep quiet when we stay at liberary

Argue
Arguement is not a good way to solve some problems.

Your Edited Email

Anniversary
My husband gave me a Tiffany diamond ring as a 10th anniversary gift.

Tuition
The quality of British education quality is very high but the tuition for private school is really expensive.

Depressed
I was depressed when I couldn’t use English to communicate with a foreigner (don’t give up)

Calm
I like practicing pilates because it makes me feel heart calm .

Safety
I think Japan is the safest most safety country in the world.

To be quiet
We need to keep quiet when we stay at are in the library
We need to be quiet in the library because people are trying to study.

Argue
Argument / arguing is not a good way to solve some problems.