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I fell in love with a boy in junior high.After junior high,I went to a key high school in our city,and he went to a regular high school.The two school were far away,so we split up.About after half a year,I found out that he fell in love with a good friend of us. I was very sad,but I can do nothing because we were far away.My grades were in fall. And I told my parents I wanted to transfer,of course I hadn’t told them it because of a boy. My parents were very sad,I told them that key high school was moving too fast for me,they had to let me transfer.Until now,they didn’t know it because of a boy.Now that I think about it,I was really stupid.Maybe it‘s the most rebellious thing I’ve ever done.

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I fell in love with a boy in junior high. After junior high, I went to a key special / prestigious / advanced high school in our city, and he went to a regular high school. The two schools were far away, so we split up / broke up. About after half a year, I found out that he fell in love with a one of our good friends of us / with a mutual friend. I was very sad, but I couldn’t do anything nothing because we were far apart / because I was far away. My grades began were in falling, and I told my parents I wanted to transfer. Of course, I didn’t tell them it was because of a boy. My parents were very sad. I told them that key the accelerated high school was moving too fast for me, and they had to let me transfer. Until Even now, they still don’t know it was because of a boy. Now that I think about it, I was really stupid / it was a stupid ploy. Maybe it‘s / It might be the most rebellious thing I’ve ever done.