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Today is the first day in April ,from the morning to the night, I did my work nearly twelve hours,so I felt tired very much.The things like to make public WeChat account for our classmates ,there were too many words and pictures for me to modification .When I finished the first work,the second work was coming on,I need to make a tabulation for our team’s trip to Japan which include the traffic and accommodation .After those tasks,I did some work about the economic which I didn’t like,but I have no choice.Time has gone,at eight o’clock, I felt very hungry,then I came back to my home for my diner.The evening I continue the work.Now is nearly the middle night, I wright these words for my memory. It’s time to sleep now,good night!

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Today is the first day of April. I worked nearly twelve hours today, from the morning to the night / from dawn ’til dusk, I did my work nearly twelve hours, so I felt tired very tired much. The I had many things to do, like to making public WeChat accounts for our classmates. There were too many words and pictures for me to modify. When I finished the first task / job, I had to begin the second one work was coming on immediately: I needed to make a tabulation / budget for our team’s trip to Japan, which including the traffic and accommodation. After those tasks, I did some economic work about the economic which I didn’t like, but I have no choice. Time has gone / And then, how time flies, at eight o’clock I felt very hungry, so then I came back to my home for my dinner. In the evening I continued the my work / to work. Now it is nearly the middle night midnight and I am writing these words for to reinforce my memory. It’s time to sleep now, good night!

[Good night!]