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Today I want to talk about my specialty in painting.Last class my teacher asked me that why I choose my specialty about the rock color painting,but I can’t answer him because I have never think that deeply,and there’s a difficulty for me to translate my real words to english for him.

The first reason is that I love painting,when I was a child, I like painting,singing and sporting,but I was a shame girl,so I preferred painting day by day.The second reason is that
materials about the rock color paintings come from the nature,about different colors stones,clay and sand. They are the Cosmic materials,connect with our spirit and soul. Last but not least,painting can be the medicine for me,when I was painting,I can feel the quit,happiness,and I can forget all of my troubles,cleared my soul.

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Today I want to talk about my specialty in painting. Last class my teacher asked me that why I chose rock color painting as my specialty about the, but I can’t didn’t know how to answer him because I have never thought that deeply about it and it is difficult for me to translate my real words thoughts to English for him.

The first reason is that I love painting. When I was a child, I liked painting, singing, and playing sports, but I was a shy girl, so I preferred painting day by day. The second reason is that the materials for rock color paintings come from the nature / are natural, about different colors of stones, clay and sand. They are the Cosmic materials, connected with our spirit and soul. Last but not least, painting can be the like medicine / therapy for me. When I am painting, I can feel the quiet and happiness, and I can forget all of my troubles, clear my soul.