Email Service Notes (Nick)

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Today is not a busy day for me,because I need not to go to school for work,so I woke up at 6 o’clock,but got up at 6:30 ,to study english,at the same time, I made my breakfast.

In the morning, I used my hands and the oil scraper for my paintings ,and it’s the first step for my paintings,then I need to wait them for drying.Now I need to have my lunch,and this afternoon I need to do my works on my computer,to make WeChat public account for our rock color painting’s team and our classwork.

Tonight I will go to a music concert ，to hear about the light music and the folk .All the music comes from a Japanese. In his music, I can forget my troubles in my life,and have new energies to do every thing.

Your Edited Email

Today is not a busy day for me, because I don’t need not to go to school for work. So I woke up at 6 o’clock, but got I didn’t get up at until 6:30 to study english. at the same time While I was studying, I made my breakfast.

In the morning, I used my hands and the oil scraper for my paintings. This is the first step for my paintings, and then I need to wait for them for to drying. Now I need to have my lunch, and this afternoon I need to do my some work on my computer, i.e. to make WeChat a public WeChat account for our rock color painting’s team and our classwork.

Tonight I will go to a music concert, to hear about the light music and the folk music. All the music comes from is by a Japanese artist. In his music, I can forget my troubles in my life, and have new energy to do everything.