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lease help me to correct below writting
I try to use some words what were I learned by myself
peninsula
frost
hood
constellation
commute
belief
blissfully
declare

Asia has a famous peninsula that named Korea, it used a north latitude angle 38 to separated North Korea and South Korea. SK is a beautiful country, I will visit there in not long of future. My friend who has been visit there told me the weather of North Korea which the frost is frequently in the winter, you can look at the light white on the hood. Most people just can take bus to commute from home to workplace. He used a brochure to wrote some details which are how to play in SK.
Jeong-eun Kim is president of the North Korea. He got(inherit) the position from his father.
I really want to know his constellation because he is a super lucky guy and his political methods were very special, The felling was look like ancient dynasty of China. I think powerful is his belief. Maybe it’s blissfully for him ,because he didn’t need to ask other people who will agree his decision. He was declared that we will protect the territory safety of the country, when the other countries do some aggressive action. It’s sounds a little bit thrilled, because I can smelled out something of war.

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please help me to correct below the writing below
I tried / am trying to use some words what were that I learned by myself
peninsula – correct
frost – “frost” is a noun, meaning a light covering of frozen water (probably not even thick enough to be called ice); “to frost over,” “to be covered in frost,” “(for frost to) form upon” is the verb form; frosty is the adjective
hood – correct
constellation – the shapes that stars make in the sky when seen from Earth
commute – correct
belief – correct, but a belief should be a “belief in something,” like one’s abilities, a god, etc.
blissfully – correct, but adverbs have to describe verbs or adjectives
declare – correct

Asia has a famous peninsula that named called the Korean Peninsula. it used a The border that separates North and South Korea is at 38 degrees north latitude angle 38 to separated North Korea and South Korea. SK is a beautiful country, I will visit there in not long of the near future. My friend who has been there / visited told me the weather of North Korea, which the frost is frequently quite frosty in the winter. You can look at the light white frost which forms on the hoods of people’s jackets. Most people just can take the / a bus to commute from their home to their workplace. He used a brochure to write some details which are how to play about what to do in SK.

Jeong-eun Kim is president of the North Korea. He got(inherited) the position from his father.
I really want to know his constellation (astrological) sign because he is a super lucky guy and his political methods were very special. The felling was look like ancient dynasty of China. I think his belief [in what?] is powerful is his belief. Maybe it’s blissfully for him, because he didn’t need to ask whether other people who will agree with his decision. He was declared: that “we will protect the safety of our territory of the country, when the other countries do some against all aggressive action.“ It sounds a little bit thrilling because I can smelled out something the coming / a hint of war [in/on the air].