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Christchurch attack: a manifesto was sent 9 minutes ago before the attack.

The toll of New Zealand Christchurch terrorist attack had risen to 50, the authority confirmed recently. Up to now, there are still 34 injuries in the hospital and 12 of them are in critical conditions.In this terrible event, the gunman’s cruel massacre stunning all over the world and being condemned strongly.

Today, the prime minister of New Zealand discovered that she got a manifesto 9 minutes ago before the attack happened, but unfortunately it didn’t show the location or any details.The spokesman said, the attacker was apprehended and all investigation is going on. In the other hand, the forensic officials and pathologists are working around the scene, gathering the evidences and identifying the bodies.

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Christchurch attack: a manifesto was sent 9 minutes ago before the attack.

The death toll of New Zealand Christchurch terrorist attack had risen to 50, the authorities confirmed recently. Up to now, there are still 34 injured [people] / wounded in the hospital and 12 of them are in critical condition. In this terrible event, The gunman’s cruel massacre has stunned stunning all over the whole world and has been widely / strongly being condemned strongly.

Today, the prime minister of New Zealand discovered that she got a manifesto 9 minutes ago before the attack happened, but unfortunately it didn’t show the location or any details. The spokesman said, the attacker was apprehended and all a thorough investigation is on-going on. In the other hand, the forensic officials and pathologists are working around on the scene, gathering the evidence and identifying the bodies.