Email Service Notes (Nick)

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Today I had an very interesting class with Tibo.

At the beginning of class,he asked me what had happened recently and how did I feel today.I thought about for a while.I said I felt tired,and I was trying to adjust myself to get used to the work pace after the 7 days’ break.

Then I told him I was preparing to get the visa for America.L.A and San Francisco were our destinations for this trip.He asked me why I chose these two cities and the plan of our trip.I answered him honestly.When I said we would drive from L.A. to San Francisco,he became interested in it.He said let’s do a role play for car rental.It sounds very intersting so I agreed with him.

When the role play had finished, I realized there were still many problems existed in my English.I thought it was a good way for me to use the vocabulary I learnt in class. I could notice the way I expressed during the conversation if it was correct or not right now.

Your Edited Email

Today I had a very interesting class with Tibo.

At the beginning of class, he asked me what had happened recently and how did I feel today. I thought about it for a while, and then I said I felt tired, and I was trying to re-adjust myself to get used to the work pace after the 7 days’ break.

Then I told him I was preparing to get the an American visa for America. L.A and San Francisco were will be our destinations for this trip. He asked me why I chose these two cities and the plan of our trip. I answered him honestly. When I said we would drive from L.A. to San Francisco, he became interested in it. He said let’s do a role play for car rental. It sounds very interesting so I agreed with him to do it.

When the role play had finished, I realized there were still many problems existed in my English. I thought it was a good way for me to use the vocabulary I learnt in class. I could notice the way if I expressed myself correctly during the conversation if it was correct or not right now.** ***

** I could notice the mistakes I made during the conversation.

*** I can notice when I make mistakes now.