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A anti-society people killing 4 people was prosecuted death penalty. (lilyl)

On June 22,2018, a man named XinHaiPing committed a cruel homicide in a bus in the Xian, Shaanxi province, causing 4 people died and 7 people injured, which astonished all over the country. Recently, the Xian’s International Meditate People’s Court prosecuted him death penalty and deprived of his political rights. Why he came into being the evil plan? According to the public reports, XinHaiPing was attacked by malicious injections in the bus and then got ill. The prosecutor said, that incident deeply depressed and aggravated him. So he decided to revenge the society by slashing people randomly.

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An anti-social person anti-society people who killed killing 4 people was prosecuted sentenced** to death / given the death penalty. (lilyl)

On June 22, 2018, a man named XinHaiPing committed a cruel homicide in a bus in the Xi’an, Shaanxi province, causing killing 4 people died and injuring 7 more people injured, which astonished people all over the country. Recently, the Xi’an’s International Meditate Intermediate People’s Court prosecuted sentenced him to the death penalty and deprived him of his political rights. Why did he came into being act on the evil plan? According to the public reports, XinHaiPing was attacked by malicious injections(?)*** in the bus and then got ill. The prosecutor said, that incident deeply depressed and aggravated him. So he decided to avenge himself against the society by slashing people randomly.

** To prosecute is to take to court to show guilt; to sentence is to tell a guilty person what their punishment will be.

***An injection is not something that can be malicious, or that can attack. Who did this?