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Hi Vincenzo

When I arrived at factory found they didn’t pack goods in packing line,I also didn’t find goods in storehouse. only fond they were producing Dragons and Penguins in sewing line. they told me that others characters were produced outside.

They were preparing test samples these days, I checked somes samples found that:

1, Dragons’ bodies are visible shorter than signed sample

2, Penguins’ wings and Donkeys’ tails are not as pretty as signed sample

3, Pandas and blue Dragons have samll colour deviation compared with signed sampe.

4. Puss in boots printing not as goos as signed sample

Factory also sent Boss body and Alex to do test on later Sep 30th, So factory has already sent 8 characters to do test by Sep 30th.

Thank you and Best Regards

Tony Liu

Your Edited Email

Hi Vincenzo,

When I arrived at the factory I found that they didn’t pack the goods in the packing line. I also didn’t find the goods in the storehouse. I found that they were only producing Dragons and Penguins in the sewing line. They told me that the other characters were produced outside.

They were preparing test samples when I was there, so I checked some samples and found that:

1. The dragons’ bodies are visibly shorter than the signed sample.

2. The penguins’ wings and donkeys‘ tails are not as pretty as the signed sample.

3. The pandas and blue dragons have a small colour deviation compared with the signed sample.

4. The Puss in Boots printing is not as good as the signed sample.

The factory also sent Boss‘s body and Alex to do testing on later Sep 30th, so the factory has already sent 8 characters to do testing by Sep 30th.

Thank you and best regards,

Tony Liu

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