Email Service Notes (Nick)

Your Original Email


Nail & Fix
More population like to use nail to fix the old photos on the wall

Crisis
Your sales figures was not good this year, how to solve the crisis, do you have some ideas?

Drug
Drug is negative thing, cause it always have imagination in illegal

By hand
Now day, more people like to spend more expensive money to buy something than before,.cause it produce by hand and without manchine.

Overseas
I hope I can contact more foreign clients of over seas

Affection
Recently I have strongly affection with my new female colleague

Regulatory
you should be make a regulatory plane, if not the result will really important

Prompt
the classmate started a positive discussion, when he prompt a topic of Chinese territory problem

Consumer
you must be design a new Ad to attract potential consumer in the after 3 months

Testify
criminal try to testified that has a another accomplice to robbed bank together.

Your Edited Email


Nail & Fix
Many people like to use nails to fix the old photos on the wall

Crisis
Your sales figures were not good this year. How should we solve this crisis? Do you have any ideas?

Drug
“Drug” is negative thing/word,because it always makes you think of illegal things

By hand
Nowadays, more people like to spend more expensive money to buy something than before, because it was produced by hand and without machines.

Overseas
I hope I can contact more foreign/overseas clients of overseas

Affection
Recently, I have noticed a strongly affection for with my new female colleague

Regulatory
You should be make a regulatory plan. If you don’t the result will be really bad important

Prompt
the classmate started a positive discussion when he prompt a topic of Chinese territory problem
Please write an essay in response to the prompt you have been provided.
A prompt is something that is meant to make you think about something specific. As a verb, it is more of a suggestion of something specific than an invitation to discussion.

Consumer
you must be design a new Ad to attract potential consumers in the next/coming after 3 months

Testify
The criminal tried to testify that he and an another accomplice to robbed the bank together.