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Before I birth my daughter. I couldn’t envision that I can became to a mother. I didn’t like children. Because I thought they are nougty and noisy.But life is always changing. You couldn’t control everything in your hand. Now,my daughter is 6 years old. When I held in my arm. I never felt the happy like this, I wanted to give her anything I had; I wanted to stay with her forever. I wanted to be a nice Preston for her. Everytime when I saw her,she can gaves me:happy,warm,peace,all of the good feeling from with her.My husband said:you got a big change.when she growns up to one and half years old. I have got her to lots of place,and taken lots of photos to commemorate.

But the happy time was finished until she was three and half years old. I was beginning to give her studying on Marth,English,and other subjects.Our relationship was broken.Almost time I couldn’t control my temperament. I usually rude to her and hit her.When I did these things for her, I would feel angry,sad,dispair,repent to myself.

Now, I tried to control myself. I don’t want her shed tears for me again.

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Before I gave birth to my daughter, I couldn’t envision being a mother. I didn’t like children, because I thought they are naughty and noisy. But, life is always changing. You can’t control everything in your hand. Now, my daughter is 6 years old. When I held her in my arms, I never felt the so happy like this,. I felt I would wanted to give her anything I had; I wanted to stay with her forever. I wanted to be a good role model for her. Every time when I saw her, she can gaves made me feel: happy, warm, peaceful–all of the good feelings from could be felt with her. My husband said: you got a big have changed a lot. When she growns up to By the time she was one and half years old, I had taken got her to lots of places, and taken lots of photos to commemorate.

But the happy time was finished until once she was three and half years old. I was beginning began to give her studying lessons on Math, English, and other subjects. Our relationship was broken. I could almost never time I couldn’t control my temperament. I was usually rude to her and I even hit her.When I did these things to her, I would feel angry and sad, and I would despair and repent to myself.

Now, I try to control myself. I don’t want her to shed tears because of me again.