Email Service Notes (Nicholas)

Your Original Email

I don’t like cold weather.Because I had a terrible headache. So I really hate winter.Everytime in the cold weather,I will have a fever about 2 times for a week.
China is a big country. I live in Shanghai.Shanghai is in the south of the country.It’s a warm city.So it isn’t usually has snow.
One year before,Shanghai has a big snow,but just snow down one day.

Your Edited Email

I don’t like the cold weather because it gives me terrible headaches. I especially hate winter; everytime there is cold weather, I will get a fever twice weekly.

China is a big country. I live in Shanghai — in the southern part of the country. It’s a warm city and we are usually without snow.

Last year, Shanghai experienced a big snowfall, but it was over after only one day.