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Your Original Email

Dear Sir/Madam
I’m writing to you to talk about my cat and i wish i could introduce my cat well in the future.it’s a chinese pastrol cat,also called as Tu Mao since it’s not a purebred cat.it’s a one-half years old boy,with an orange fur on whole body.Before become my friend,it was a stray cat and i came across him on the road one day.I thought if the cute and poor guy is willing to follow me,i could adopt him.It’s really a naughy boy so i must clean my house everyday! But when i go back to home,i know it’s waiting for me and that’s really sweet in fact.In addition,it eat so much cat food and can food,which explain the weight of 6.5 kilos.
Thank you for your time and your coming reponse.Wish you good life.
Yours Sincerely
Joy

Your Edited Email

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to discuss my cat and introduce him. He is a Chinese pastrol cat, also known as “Tu Mao” — he is not a purebred cat. He is 1.5 years old and has orange fur. Before I befriended my cat, he was a stray; I came across him on the road one day. I thought if this cute and poor guy is willing to follow me, I should adopt him. He can really be a naughty boy, so I must clean my house everyday! But when I go back home, I know he’s waiting for me — it’s really sweet. In addition, he eats so much cat food including canned food, which explains his weight of 6.5 kilos.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to your response. Wishing you success and happiness.

Yours Sincerely,

Joy