Email Service Notes (Nicholas)

Your Original Email

Dear Nancy,
Thank you for your invitation to your party at your home on Friday afternoon. I’d love to come but I can’t because I have a very important English exam at the same time. I am really sorry for missing your party. And I hope that all of you will enjoy a good time together.
Besides, I want to hold a party at my home on Sunday evening if you are available? Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come, then I would invite some other friends to join us.
Please allow me to say sorry again.

With best regards
Wang Lin

Your Edited Email

Dear Nancy,

Thank you for the invitation to your party on Friday afternoon. I’d love to come, but I can’t because I have a very important English exam at the same time. I am really sorry for missing your party. I hope that all of you will enjoy a good time together.

If you’re available, I would like to host you at my home on Sunday evening. If you can come just let me know and I will invite some other friends to join us.

Again, I apologize for miss your party. Hope to see you Sunday!

With Warm Regards,
Wang Lin