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My favourite colour is blue. It’s a comfortable colour because it’s the same colour as the sky. When I was a child, blue was one of the favourite colours. I used to sit nearby the window in the class where I can see the scenery outside. I think blue is stand for freedom. But I was also used to chose pink like most little girls when I bought cloth, shoes and toys . Actually, all of colours I liked when I was a child. Because I like the rainbow, the crayon, the candy and almost colourful things in my life. That is the important thing in my child what make my life all of meaning. I got bright clothes when I was young, like yellow, red, green. I have a lot of T-shirt in different bright colours. I think different colours of clothes with different pants or skirts. This is a reason to explain why I waste ten minutes every morning.

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My favourite colour is blue. It’s a comfortable colour because it’s the same colour as the sky. When I was a child, blue was one of my favourite colours. I used to sit near the window in class where I could see the scenery outside. I think blue stands for freedom. But I also used to choose pink like most little girls when I bought clothes, shoes and toys . Actually, I liked every color when I was a child. Because I liked rainbows, crayons, candy and every colourful thing in my life. That was the most important thing in my childhood which gave my life meaning / and it is what gave my life meaning . I got bright clothes when I was young, like yellow, red, and green. I have a lot of T-shirt in different bright colours. I think different colored clothing goes with different pants or skirts. This explains why I waste ten minutes every morning.